Post by ~*Age*~ on Jun 3, 2011 16:50:34 GMT -6
Lesson 5 is just bringing everything together.
The young man walked alone in the dark. 'I hate the darkness.' he thought, making a sour face. Being alone, he walked at his own quick pace.
This is a good start. We just need to keep doing what we're doing and make it longer.
The young man walked alone in the dark. 'I hate the darkness.' he thought, making a sour face. Being alone, he walked at his own quick pace. He hated the dark, that was true, but he liked being alone.
And so on. It's best to use three paragraphs, each with three good sentences at the very least. Separate the paragraphs by pressing the "enter" key twice, skipping a line. Here is a different example:
A young girl walked through the forest on a full moon. She was looking for something. 'It has to be here somewhere.' she thought.
She had been searching for months now in the forest. She liked the full moon nights better because she could see. "Not here," she said aloud, looking under the roots of a huge old tree.
She looked all night and part of the morning before she got too tired to continue. Since home was too far away for her to walk at this point, she settled under a tree. Curled up in the dirt, she fell asleep.
That's the minimum. More is better, but too much is boring. You'll be able to tell the difference, so don't worry!
The young man walked alone in the dark. 'I hate the darkness.' he thought, making a sour face. Being alone, he walked at his own quick pace.
This is a good start. We just need to keep doing what we're doing and make it longer.
The young man walked alone in the dark. 'I hate the darkness.' he thought, making a sour face. Being alone, he walked at his own quick pace. He hated the dark, that was true, but he liked being alone.
And so on. It's best to use three paragraphs, each with three good sentences at the very least. Separate the paragraphs by pressing the "enter" key twice, skipping a line. Here is a different example:
A young girl walked through the forest on a full moon. She was looking for something. 'It has to be here somewhere.' she thought.
She had been searching for months now in the forest. She liked the full moon nights better because she could see. "Not here," she said aloud, looking under the roots of a huge old tree.
She looked all night and part of the morning before she got too tired to continue. Since home was too far away for her to walk at this point, she settled under a tree. Curled up in the dirt, she fell asleep.
That's the minimum. More is better, but too much is boring. You'll be able to tell the difference, so don't worry!
